Mr. Cool

Mr. Cool

A Poem by Sunshine Jackson
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A funky-fresh rhyme from the Grandwizard Rokee Bay

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I'm that Lazertag Playin', Ill-rhyme sayin

Displayin' all of that pig-made bacon

It's crispy, do if you eff with me

I will definately stick the knife into your kidney

quickly, my first name is Houston like Whitney

Houston's last name, I'm sitin in the grass mayne

sunshine shinin' with a book in my lap mayne

I'm black mayne, afro; long-haired hippies

all gets together, so we can kick thee

mad-ill rhymes on top the tracks. Flax

seed in my cereal in mornin'

optimum health so at my best I'm performin'

born in Washintonia, in the U-S tates

some people think I'm great

but some people don't agree with those guys

some is young-dumb suckas, some is old-wise

cats, with mad s**t under they hats; that's

okay though cuz Rokee Bay's no theoretical Jesus

He's just way cold, Hey Yo! Check me out

I put lettuce spinach cabbage in my mouth

and eat it up yo, I digest it

check the health method, not infected

apple on the floor half eaten,  I put it in my teeth and

some folks ain't down with that and that's wack

as the double-mint reversable slacks

© 2008 Sunshine Jackson


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Got sum nice lyrics going on there houstone...
its like a general yet detailed introduction of rokee bay
and yah thats good and all, but here's a plan u might want 2 invest in... political poetry, just like Gil Scott-Heron. but instead of the spoken word technique he used, u should make that the rymes in your rap tunes. and im not saying u try sumthin like P.E., though good they were, but rather rokee bay as an individual poetic activist, with funkee a*s beats. just a thought; i'll let you grow on that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Got sum nice lyrics going on there houstone...
its like a general yet detailed introduction of rokee bay
and yah thats good and all, but here's a plan u might want 2 invest in... political poetry, just like Gil Scott-Heron. but instead of the spoken word technique he used, u should make that the rymes in your rap tunes. and im not saying u try sumthin like P.E., though good they were, but rather rokee bay as an individual poetic activist, with funkee a*s beats. just a thought; i'll let you grow on that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're...
unique.
With your writing.
That's all I can really say. :]

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2008

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Sunshine Jackson
Sunshine Jackson

Stankonia, WA



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Allow me to re-introduce myself, my name is ((c)Hov) Rokee Bay I'm a funky fresh emcee every day and every night, I roll with the Great White and Professor Murdah, who make the beats that's tight So.. more..

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