Winter is here

Poem of love loss

Winter is here
I can feel the chills up and down my spine
I'd rather feel the warmth of summer anytime


I often think to myself this is the worst season of the year it's been so cold for quite sometime here


my heart is so broken and I'm unable to fight these tears I feel so alone sitting on this cozy chair of ours it feels so empty and void without your presence near


as I sit beside this fire I built wondering where I went wrong with you I can't help but think to myself though I feel so alone without you beside me maybe it's for the best baby because it would be hard to get over you if you were lingering around me

to be friends wouldn't work for me I'm too inlove with you to pretend about my feelings


The new year is coming soon maybe I'll be alright then

they say time heals all wounds and broken promises


I can only hope that is true because right now I feel like my life isn't life without having you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and honest journey in your words.
"The new year is coming soon maybe I'll be alright then
they say time heals all wounds and broken promises "
I believe in the above lines. Time apart from sad place become less painful. Not forgot. Just a lesson. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farmgirl]

Thanks for visiting again :')
This was just a depiction of what I imagine my life would be like without having him beside me

I do think about leaving and have even left before

But the heart wants what it wants

My mind is just starting not to agree with her lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Heart never forget. Hard to learn. We can't have what we want. You are welcome my friend.

[Farmgirl]

I know that's right !
Isn't that a song ? XD

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes and no. "We can't always get what we want, but sometime we get what we need"

[Farmgirl]

Sooo true my friend! :-)

[winter;lyra]

ayo dawg so i heard u been talkin sh*t about me?

[Farmgirl]

Hahahhaahahahahahahhahaha

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Well, i like your idea.....and the comparison of the coldest season with the coldness that you feel inside now that you have lost your love.

As a whole it is written very well, although I do think it would read much better if you made greater use of punctuation to break the flow of your verses. Doing this would make your poem better as a whole and easier in the mind of the reader. Just a thought.

Otherwise, a nice little piece. Emotive and heartfelt writing.

[Farmgirl]

Thanks for visiting has I agree my punctuation is far from poeticy

But that's okay language has never really been a strong suit for me

If I remember I try to forget if you know what I mean lol


The is for visiting :-)

[Farmgirl]

Excuse typos from excitement of a visitor hehehe


😂

[Aishwarya Prem]

Your poem made me sad and cold!! Stay strong and keep writing dear :)