Her Stained Heart

Her fragile spine is resting against a wooden post, one material connected inside out.

Her narrow face is an empty expression of emotions.

Her chest rises and falls

Timely

Slowly

Deeply.

Twilight is making an introduction as the sky has replaced its nightgown with a silvery morning dress.

 

"The moon never stays in the sky pass its time."

 

Her words carry weight.

Her time has come to an end

Knowing this day would come

Yet never predicting this level of difficulty.

She knows she has reached the nadir of despair.

Her vision should be upward and forward.

 

"The sun knows when she is no longer desired and moves on to where she is needed."

But the pass keeps her looking back.

The past is stained in her heart.

He is stained in her heart and will not be removed so easily.

Author's Note

please be honest;)

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

Nice. I could relate and understand. It flowed well and gave out a piece of you to the reader. Great job.

[Chris]

takes time for the "shock" of life to wear down... sometimes it takes a lifetime.

Chris

[Just Cat]

A beautifully painful poem. I like the imagery, the moon, stars and sun. I love the feel of the poem. The last line burnt into my heart.
Great write, thank you so much for sharing!

[Sleepless]

know this feeling so well!!!!! it is ad when someone can leave your heart but beautiful poem !:)

[Rosewood...]

Masterfully written.....

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oh my, I love it! The emotions you created in this poem is well done. Its written very well. I also love the images you show through your words. =)
Such hurt is expressed so deeply.. i can relate so well..
Fantastic write!

[northern monkey]

Great piece - isn't it the pain in life that keeps us appreciating our everyday lives?
Roll on your next piece Dreamer..................

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Realy Hurt I can see the depth... Nice..

[Seashell]

sad to carry such a burden for ever but well penned...very well penned...
I like your work
Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge
Babs xx

[WritersSoul]

This is sad to know, these emotions that play a great weight to everyone who endures this :( Great write :) ^^