Leaking!

Hand me that wrench

I'm going to close this pipe up.

God knows I've had enough of you!

 

Give me that towel

I'm going to dry this mess up.

Stand there

Don't let me see you move.

 

You don't think!

You don't consider!

You just dive crazily out of impluse.

 

Then when you're being dragged to the bottom of reality

I'm the only one drowning with you.

And I'm tired of this!

 

I think!

I consider!

I don't dive cause nobody is guaranteed to be by your side- I depend on ME!

 

But you're free spirited...

You trust...

You're willing to love-

 

And damn it thats why I'm lying here drenched in fears!

Listening to the tears as they "Dip...dip...drip..."

Drowning me in sorrow.

 

But I've had enough of this, I wouldn't say it again!

Hand me that wrench so I can close this pipe up.

Get those towels, WE'RE going to clean this mess up.

 

I know you love to wallow in this defeat,

But if you try to stop me,

I will cut you out myself...

 

Author's Note

open to ur opinion:) oh... this is a conversation or rather an argument between me and my heart. Be honest please:)

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Amazing piece!! I love how you wrote this poem. =D So beautiful. Quite clever and I like the view between the voice and your heart. Straight-forward, well written.. Simply lovely. It's a powerful write!

[dreaming dame]

Nice. I like this. A different point of view. :)

[northern monkey]

Beautiful piece Dreamer. Respect your courage and honesty at such a young age - you're so right that self-reliance will protect you, but that we all have to risk loss and pain if we want to experience love. Keep writing star.

[J. Hampton]

cleverly done : )
making light verse of absolutely serious choices

[Kenneth The Poet]

Reminds of my own home's plumbing problems. Nice connection there, great work in fact.

[Daytonight]

I love the direction you took with this poem. You really "worked" over the topic well. ! :) Great job. Keep on penning.

[Call Me Blu]

I like the way it sounds almost comical yet the meaning is deeper if to take the chance to read it well. Great write!

[brenda]

nice definetly a poem i can take and learne from its words i know how this feels like !:) love t favorite :)

[biggerthenu]

IM HAPPY I READ YOUR REVIEW I WAS A LITTLE LOST TOWARDS THE ENDING WANTING MORE WONDERING WHO WERE U TALKING TO AND WHAT R U CLOSING AND CUTTING NOW I UNDERSTAND THIS WAS NICELY WRITTEN BUT LOVE SHOULD BE FREELY GAVEN YET PROTECTED ALSO I LOVED IT BUT PLEASE LETS NOT CLOSE IT FULLY JUST TIGHTEN IT UP A LITTLE