WARNING!

The more time passes on,

The less faith I have in you...

 

The more time I gaze at nothing,

The less I believe what you've ever said is true...

 

 

STOP TESTING ME!

 

 

You say absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Well absence will make this heart go away.

I'm tired being the only fool

Trying to put two halves together

That you're not even sure should be whole.

So enjoy the proximity while you can- or don't!

But if you ask me once more to give you an inch,

I wouldn't wait for you to sneak the yard.

I'll give you megaparsecs

Build a wall

And hang a sign up where you can see, saying

 

"BACK THE HELL AWAY!"

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

flow of emotions! not the best though... not even sure i'll keep this one up for long

Reviews

[misha]

Your feelings are shown clearly through this piece, great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we will run out of patience for people who want to be part-time. Better to create a separation and move on. I like the honest words and the very strong ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[brenda]

lmao at the last line oh i love this poem !:) its really really good !!:)

[kymee]

I like it. Common subject. Not sure I would put a comma after fool. I would recommend instead of nor, use or. we all need one of these signs for people who won't go away, leave you alone etc. as long as he got the message than it was a job well done

[Becky C Strukamp]

You express the feelings of determination well. I like it. It is very well written. Good work.

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Excellent expression. Seems like pent up emotions finally released. I don't get the font changes though.