WARNING!

The more time passes on,

The less faith I have in you...

 

The more time I gaze at nothing,

The less I believe what you've ever said is true...

 

 

STOP TESTING ME!

 

 

You say absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Well absence will make this heart go away.

I'm tired being the only fool

Trying to put two halves together

That you're not even sure should be whole.

So enjoy the proximity while you can- or don't!

But if you ask me once more to give you an inch,

I wouldn't wait for you to sneak the yard.

I'll give you megaparsecs

Build a wall

And hang a sign up where you can see, saying

 

"BACK THE HELL AWAY!"

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

flow of emotions! not the best though... not even sure i'll keep this one up for long

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

A flow of emotions indeed. This poem was quite an interesting read. It was intriguing, angry, indignant. Many negative emotions, but It writing this was cathartic. Allowed you to release your emotions. Which are the best kind of poems!

[biggerthenu]

THIS IS LOUD AND IF THEY CANT GET THE PICTURE THEN THEY CANT SEE I FELT THIS ONE

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This poem speaks volumes! Brillantly written!

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
You poem speaks a clear message that can be summed up with two words. Healthy Boundaries. A strong, good write with your message clear.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[light and ashes]

Very nice and strong poem.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I love the vast amount of emotion in this piece! Your anger here surely shows that you can stand your ground...I love it! Great work!

[Daytonight]

Awesome write! Full of feelings! Well done. Keep on penning.

[Yina]

You tell him!! I know all about absence also making the heart go away. It does actually happen, sadly enough

[Sukriti Suki]

Waiting requires a lot more than patience.....trust, belief, want, desire....but yes if we have to wait for too long we will lose faith....As they say ' others will start finding faults if you make them wait for too long'....This piece is really nice for the message...the initial couplet is my favourite.

[Nicky Wilson]

YOU TELL HIM HUNNIE :)!! lovely write as always :)