Sweet Moment

Sweet Moment

A Poem by Sunrising

Love is transformed, renewed,
each moment.
She dwells  in my heart  whole day
always seeing her
I hear her sweet voice
that always seems new to me

© 2016 Sunrising


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a love renewed daily,what more could you want

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Instead of telling the reader how you feel about someone we know nothing about, why not make the reader feel that way?

When you read the poem the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in your brain. But when someone who is not you reads it, the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in YOUR brain.

In short: make them live it, not learn about it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
beautiful short poem!!
thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Pretty,short and sweet. I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
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This is very pretty :) great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 19, 2016
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