Sweet Moment
A Poem by
Sunrising
Love is transformed,
renewed,
each moment.
She dwells
in my heart whole day
always seeing her
I hear her sweet voice
that always seems new to me
© 2016 Sunrising
Reviews
a love renewed daily,what more could you want
Posted 8 Years Ago
Instead of telling the reader how you feel about someone we know nothing about, why not make the reader feel that way?
When you read the poem the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in your brain. But when someone who is not you reads it, the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in YOUR brain.
In short: make them live it, not learn about it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Instead of telling the reader how you feel about someone we know nothing about, why not make the reader feel that way?
When you read the poem the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in your brain. But when someone who is not you reads it, the words evoke memories, emotion, and images that reside in YOUR brain.
In short: make them live it, not learn about it.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your review!
beautiful short poem!!
thanks for sharing :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
beautiful short poem!!
thanks for sharing :)
Pretty,short and sweet. I liked it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Pretty,short and sweet. I liked it.
This is very pretty :) great job
Posted 8 Years Ago
This is very pretty :) great job
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