Sweet Moment
A Poem by
Sunrising
Love is transformed,
renewed,
each moment.
She dwells
in my heart whole day
always seeing her
I hear her sweet voice
that always seems new to me
© 2016 Sunrising
Reviews
Sir, I think this is an ambitious poem.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Sunrising,
This writing reminds me of someone in a new relationship. All emotions and thoughts are centered around this new love. All energy surrounds this person and carries you throughout the day. You captured this intensity in a small poem yet it says it all. Well done.
Richie b.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Sunrising,
This writing reminds me of someone in a new relationship. All emotions and thoughts are centered around this new love. All energy surrounds this person and carries you throughout the day. You captured this intensity in a small poem yet it says it all. Well done.
Richie b.
very nice, it fits so well with this song :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4sbDxR22z4&list=PLs_lohdXVBzIU61cNDsFEGN7yV8dKchhZ&index=1
Posted 7 Years Ago
very nice, it fits so well with this song :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4sbDxR22z4&list=PLs_lohdXVBzIU61cNDsFEGN7yV8dKchhZ&index=1
Sweet words for a special someone. Nicely done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Sweet words for a special someone. Nicely done.
7 Years Ago
Hi, Nessly. Thank you for reading.
7 Years Ago
You're welcome.
Short and sweet, Sun.......
When one is in love the world takes on more colour, the senses are heightened and sounds become clearer in the mind. The voice of the one we love becomes ever more angelic with each passing day. Always new, never familiar.
A very nice little ode to love. Keep writing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Short and sweet, Sun.......
When one is in love the world takes on more colour, the senses are heightened and sounds become clearer in the mind. The voice of the one we love becomes ever more angelic with each passing day. Always new, never familiar.
A very nice little ode to love. Keep writing.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Doodley, for reading and your support of my writing. Hope all is well. :)
beautiful. I love it. sweet and simple, yet beautiful
Posted 8 Years Ago
beautiful. I love it. sweet and simple, yet beautiful
8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading!
8 Years Ago
welcome. no problem!
Pretty lovely piece
Simple
Posted 8 Years Ago
Pretty lovely piece
Simple
very good!! thats how you know you are in love... when nothing gets old!
Posted 8 Years Ago
very good!! thats how you know you are in love... when nothing gets old!
8 Years Ago
thank you for review!
Beautiful and hopeful for love. When we need someone day and night near. This is true love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
Beautiful and hopeful for love. When we need someone day and night near. This is true love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading!
8 Years Ago
You are welcome.
This is a great and enjoyable read!
keep writing :D
Posted 8 Years Ago
This is a great and enjoyable read!
keep writing :D
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