Sweet Moment

Sweet Moment

A Poem by Sunrising

Love is transformed, renewed,
each moment.
She dwells  in my heart  whole day
always seeing her
I hear her sweet voice
that always seems new to me

© 2016 Sunrising


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Sir, I think this is an ambitious poem.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Sunrising,
This writing reminds me of someone in a new relationship. All emotions and thoughts are centered around this new love. All energy surrounds this person and carries you throughout the day. You captured this intensity in a small poem yet it says it all. Well done.
Richie b.

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice, it fits so well with this song :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4sbDxR22z4&list=PLs_lohdXVBzIU61cNDsFEGN7yV8dKchhZ&index=1

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sunrising

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sweet words for a special someone. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Hi, Nessly. Thank you for reading.
Nessly

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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Short and sweet, Sun.......

When one is in love the world takes on more colour, the senses are heightened and sounds become clearer in the mind. The voice of the one we love becomes ever more angelic with each passing day. Always new, never familiar.

A very nice little ode to love. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Doodley, for reading and your support of my writing. Hope all is well. :)
beautiful. I love it. sweet and simple, yet beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
Angel of the devil

8 Years Ago

welcome. no problem!
Pretty lovely piece

Simple

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
very good!! thats how you know you are in love... when nothing gets old!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

thank you for review!
Beautiful and hopeful for love. When we need someone day and night near. This is true love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is a great and enjoyable read!
keep writing :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sunrising

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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