Sweet Moment

Love is transformed, renewed,
each moment.
She dwells  in my heart  whole day
always seeing her
I hear her sweet voice
that always seems new to me

Reviews

[Indu]

Sir, I think this is an ambitious poem.

[richieb]

Sunrising,
This writing reminds me of someone in a new relationship. All emotions and thoughts are centered around this new love. All energy surrounds this person and carries you throughout the day. You captured this intensity in a small poem yet it says it all. Well done.
Richie b.

[Ana B.]

very nice, it fits so well with this song :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4sbDxR22z4&list=PLs_lohdXVBzIU61cNDsFEGN7yV8dKchhZ&index=1

[Sunrising]

Thank you!

[Nessly]

Sweet words for a special someone. Nicely done.

[Sunrising]

Hi, Nessly. Thank you for reading.

[Nessly]

You're welcome.

[.]

Short and sweet, Sun.......

When one is in love the world takes on more colour, the senses are heightened and sounds become clearer in the mind. The voice of the one we love becomes ever more angelic with each passing day. Always new, never familiar.

A very nice little ode to love. Keep writing.

[Sunrising]

Thank you, Doodley, for reading and your support of my writing. Hope all is well. :)

[Angel of the devil]

beautiful. I love it. sweet and simple, yet beautiful

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading!

[Angel of the devil]

welcome. no problem!

[Nisreen]

Pretty lovely piece

Simple

[Sunrising]

Thank you!

[Johnny]

very good!! thats how you know you are in love... when nothing gets old!

[Sunrising]

thank you for review!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful for love. When we need someone day and night near. This is true love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[iamshadowine]

This is a great and enjoyable read!
keep writing :D

[Sunrising]

Thank you!