Morning

Darling! Wake up wake up,
Call the bird and its love.
How long you will sleep
Clasped to the heart of your Dark-Stone?
Listen, the morning has come
the red shafts of the sun
Are making us shudder. 

Reviews

[Indu]

Morning couplet ..........

[Diane]

Very nice. Flows very well.

[richieb]

Sunrising,
"the red shafts of the sun are making us shudder". The light and energy of the sun greets nature to rise and come to life. Plants,animals and lovers arise and meet the new dawn. Nicely written.
Richie b.

[Sunrising]

Thank you!

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Short and interesting.

A simple yet very poetic ode to morning. She comes with sun and with her comes a fresh day and new hope. This is a deeper poem than you have written previously, Sun; you are progressing very well in your quest to be an above average poet.

Keep up the good work.

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading and your support of my writings. :-)

[Akshita]

A pretty morning poem! I think anyone would love to be woken up like that.

[Sunrising]

Thanks for reading!

[@JenniferNicholeAuthor]

Hey I like that. ;) 'Call the bird and its love." I like the way the lines are so free flowing and though metaphorical in value, they call a feeling...

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem for the morning and to awake to. I liked the use of language.
"Darling! Wake up wake up,
Call the bird and its love."
The above lines. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

cease those dreams,time to live them

[Nisreen]

I sleep in alot nowadays
A beautiful way to say
hey snap out of it
rise and shine sunshine

Loads of positive energy here :)

[iamshadowine]

Such a nice description of a lovely morning!

keep writing :D