Imaginary Beloved

Her hair dense as darkness,

Her face rich as the full moon:

Unbelievable contrasts

Couched in a seat of love.

Her eyes rival lotuses.

Seeing that girl today,

My eager heart 

Is driven by desire.

Innocence and beauty

Adore her fair skin.

Reviews

[richieb]

Beautiful poem. Soft, delicate words to describe eternal feelings of that most special lady. Well done. Look forward to more good works from you.
Richie.

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading...... and your beautiful words... :-)

[Diane]

I love the wording you used to describe love.

[Sunrising]

Thank you, Diane for reading.....

[wordman]

it seems you have created a look of love

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading.... !

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. You create someone beautiful with your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sunrising]

Thank you so much for reading and beautiful words............. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[KlineXcreed]

I like the vocabulary used. I dig it! Keep up the work!

[Sunrising]

Thank you.....

[I am that I am]

This is beautifully worded. It reminds me of the Songs of Solomon. Thank you for sharing, Sunrising.

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading... :-)

[Nisreen]

Well .... Isnt That précisely how a lady wishes to be seen

[Sunrising]

It is only an imagination not real.... I just imagined, Curiosity...

[Nisreen]

Well You have a beautiful imagination

[Sunrising]

Thank you so much... :-)

[Nisreen]

Addicted to this piece

[Sunrising]

Ha haha. . Why you addcited? :-)

[Nisreen]

It just reads so well

[Sunrising]

Haha... thanks :-)