Fruit of the Gods

Fruit of the Gods

A Poem by Destiny
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My most recent desire...

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I wanted you

From the moment I opened my eyes

I had to have you

 

I could feel you on my tongue

My teeth quivered as I bit into your pink flesh

So juicy and ripe

Your sweet nectar dripping down my chin

 

I feasted on your essence

Devouring the most delicate part of you

Licking every precious morsel

 

until you were gone

 

I sat back and sighed

surveying the carnage that was your form

So filled and satisfied

 

I have feasted on the fruit of the Gods.

 

© 2008 Destiny


Author's Note

Destiny
Thanx Flow!

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It is hard to comment on perfection.. it is I think one of your best especially in erotica. it drips the puriest lust done in a truly devine way.

"I sat back and sighed

surveying the carnage that was your form

So filled and satisfied"

this is my favorite part. Extremely well done!!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a bittersweet treat. Love it. I have tasted. I have relished. I have devoured. I have longed for more. Good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm 20. A college student. If that doesn't satisfy your curiosity read my poems or ask me. * Current Projects* I'm not really working on anything right now. I have a short story on the back burn.. more..

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