Fruit of the Gods

My most recent desire...

I wanted you

From the moment I opened my eyes

I had to have you

 

I could feel you on my tongue

My teeth quivered as I bit into your pink flesh

So juicy and ripe

Your sweet nectar dripping down my chin

 

I feasted on your essence

Devouring the most delicate part of you

Licking every precious morsel

 

until you were gone

 

I sat back and sighed

surveying the carnage that was your form

So filled and satisfied

 

I have feasted on the fruit of the Gods.

 

Author's Note

Thanx Flow!

Reviews

[Dulce de Leche]

This made me want grapefruit. Haha.

I too like the carnage line.

[Nick Erickson]

The imagery in this piece was amazing, two views fighting for the front of my mind.
Was the "carnage" the aftermath of a wonderful experience, so sensual and emotional it left you drained and ruined?
...or, were you satisfied after devouring your delectible lover.
Well done, excellent flow and, again, imagery.
Well done!!

[Poetic82]

I could almost taste it...I could imagine going through these motions as I feast as well. Great imagery. I like it.

You show feels on how you were enjoying that momvent when you were feasting on the Fruit of the Gods...

[Periac]

"surveying the carnage that was your form"

brilliant

[The Poor Man's Poet]

Wow! you paint a pretty good picture,
I almost want to hand you a napkin.
Hoping that you'd save a little of for me.
This is a very good write.

The Poor Man's Poet.

[Michael]

Wow, what a great job at painting with words. I think everyone will want to have someone express such feelings, well unless it was a peach you ate. All kidding aside, you did a wonderful job.

[wizthom]

mmm took my imagination away to an erotic place

[Jake Donald Stephens]

How original and inspiring!

[Enigmatic Amor]

Fruit never sounded so thrilling and sexy. Loved it!

You made me taste every luscious burst of flavor.