A Simple Hope

A Simple Hope

A Poem by Dorian Gray
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My thoughts about the world and choices we make in a nutshell. You are your own reflection.

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When all is lost in time, 
We believe our days are done. 
In the end we pay for our crimes, 
Only then will we find the sun.  

In desperate attempts to smile, 
We look to another for love. 
Hoping to walk the right mile,  
We can forget the feelings above.

© 2013 Dorian Gray


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It is true, we are our own reflection and its quite an intriguing thought once one comes to think on it. We have to be the ones to guide ourselves in the right direction in life and make the right choices. We can't have others tell us how to play out our cards or where to take the next step. We have our own eyes and own own brains, it is up to us alone to use them the best we can.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh yes, there is an incredible shelf life on all of the slights we have perpetrated unless we have somehow made the necessary amends. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's true, we have to remember we are responsible for our own actions. Karma will remember....and never forget. Along the way, love helps us through the tough spots. Nice expression of emotions here and good rhyming. Lydi*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

After reading the entire the only word that's out of place is hoping...when everything else fails...that's all you really have left...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dorian Gray
Dorian Gray

Melbourne, Outside US/Canada, Australia



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I am 27 years old. I do not really have much to offer this world other than my writings. I live a very simple life. I live day by day to see the next night. The genre i chose here for my writing b.. more..

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