A Violent Deconstruction

A Violent Deconstruction

A Poem by Dorian Gray
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Seeing the problems that someone has put upon me and seeing the pain i have put them through. Hoping in a new world we could do much better the second time around and not make the same mistakes.

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I dream of toxic faces 
Clouded by poisonous places 
This is what I’ve paid for 
So don’t look so happy 
Because I’ve got a new creation 

  
Another reason to climb the wall of shame 
Just give me another reason 
Because it’s all the same 
This is a dying season 
So don’t look to me to blame 
  
  
I see me laying lonely, drawn towards the fire (and I’ll see the dark of flames) 
Instinctive but destruction’s forced, (educated bird of prey) 
Knowing only my own demise, (and you’ll see I’m not afraid)  
We’ll start again in the common world (and you’ll never see mistakes remade) 

    
I want you to feel this 
I want you to hate this 
Look up at me and cry for more 
Look up at me and die some more

© 2013 Dorian Gray


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A Violent Deconstruction of what we know would leave little to be saved. A Mad Max world could come. Man will become extinct and not be missed. Sad part is the hate and greed of man will take the free animals with him. I tell people. I hope a nuclear weapon is not the needed tool for man to learn. Time to seek peace and salvation. I like the reason and the purpose for the poem. You made me think this early morning. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Dorian Gray
Dorian Gray

Melbourne, Outside US/Canada, Australia



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