Peyton :)

Peyton :)

A Poem by Deck_As_Heck
"

my best friend in the whole wide world

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My friend, my sister, the love of my life.
your there through thick and thin.
your brown eyes are a pretty as they get.
and your hair is red just like the sunset.
your sense of humor makes me wild.
your 10,000 watt smile is it's best friend.
you are always by my side and support me.
even when you know i'm wrong.
I hope that when I grow old I'll still get a text.
"hey Flash :) wanna go cruise?"

© 2011 Deck_As_Heck


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Cute. I hope she has seen this.

regards,

Matthew

Posted 13 Years Ago


best friends are great i wrote a poem about my best friend i cant imagine living without her

Posted 13 Years Ago


She really means alot to you huh
she's your partner and crime I suppose :)
You should really show her
Or maybe not you don't to get shocked with that 10,000 Watt smile lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol AWWW!!!!....Wait....WHERES MY POEM HUH LINDSAY???? Lol JK Love it though!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww, has Peyt seen this? She's going to explode hearts and rainbows :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


sorry i wrote it fast

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write! There are a few typos, but Mr. Parson already covered that. I love this, though!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A nice tribute to someone you obviously love. It shines through your writing. A couple of typos...

your there through thick and thin... "you're" not your
your brown eyes are a pretty as they get... "as" not a
your 10,000 watt smile is it's best friend..."its" not it's


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2011
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Deck_As_Heck
Deck_As_Heck

pratt, KS



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