The concert

i haven't put a poem on here that rhymed yet so i though hey! there's a first for everything! i just felt like this one should rhyme because it felt like it should be intense.

Adrenalin pulses in my muscles and veins.

Worries are gone no need for the pains.

Lights are flashing people dancing.

Hands are pounding bodies mashing.

The beat rolls in like a swift thunder.

It captivates me with its crazy wonder.

The guitar strikes with an epic riff.

The bass follows in with a pounding pick.

Now the singer blast’s his voice away.

The crowd is like a wave on the shore of the bay.

Everyone in the room moving as one,

Full of Music, love, fire and fun.

The band winds down to sing one last song.

The exhausted crowd chants all night long.

Adrenalin pulses in my muscles and veins.

I can’t wait to go back again.

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

this was really good i loved it :)

[Jonathan]

I like how you described this I can tell you had
In that concert. Live music is the best feeling the bass
shaking your organs and making your heart awaken with
Such enjoyment.

[Kiri Nells]

This is very fun! It isn't meaningful, per say, because it was written simply for the rhyme, but the flow is great and the rhymes worked well. Good job!

[Ivy]

I love it! It's fun, and I love the way you described things! Good job friend!