Complete Surrender

To you I surrender every part of me
Promising to always have your back
To you I submit this you'll see
Promising I'll stay on track

I'll always devote myself and my time
To this woman before me and her daughter
Our life as beautiful as each word we rhyme
Your a wonderful mother and I applaud her

You've become my world which I never want to lose
I'm in orbit, I revolve around you
You're love and affection I will never abuse
Staring up at the sky so blue

I've never given so much of myself
Unaware I had so much to give
Poor in money but in love I have wealth
It's because of you I want to live

Forever all of me belonging to you
To you I surrender my all
Once lost in life without a clue
Now I have someone to catch me when I fall

I love you with everything I have inside
I promise to always strive to be the best
It's you I will always want at my side
It's you I'll cherish till I'm laid to rest

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Complete Surrender'
Sumo,
This stanza holds the core of strength for above poem to me.
Stanza four:
'Iv'e never given so much of myself
Unaware I had so much to give
Poor in money but in love I have wealth
It's because of you I want to live'
The above lines show how simple this thing called love can really be.
I think sometimes where we as people can have great pain is that
we really have expectations that may not be realistic.
If we simply love just because it is hard to be disappointed.
That being said it sure does take living and learning.
Blessings,
Kathy

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[Nisreen]

I hope she is on Writerscafe and reads your words

this is really well written

[Sumo]

She is, I send them to her first because they're to her. I post here to share my work.

[Nisreen]

Well that is sweet
No one could ask for more