Nature

Nature

A Poem by SuMM3rGiRl777
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Nature is awesome! ^_^ Recognize Nature.

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What is Nature?
Nature is Life.
Nature is our Life.
We live in it.
We are surrounded by it.
We should nurture it.
Nature is beautiful.
Nature is amazing.
Nature is fruitful.
Nature is a blessing.
It shouldn't be near the crucial.
Nature gives us the feeling to inhale and exhale the wonderful air.
You feel the nature's breeze breezing through your hair.
Yeah, nature has it's ups and downs with it's bipolar weather.
But no worries, because nature has its helpers.
Nature has its beautiful creatures.
Creatures that we all know what mostly are their unique features.
Some of them are land creatures some of them are water creatures.
It's so amazing what we have around us.
Nature is something we should love to discuss.
Nature has wonderful sights.
Nature gives us light Day and Night.
Nature has its amazing gardens, with beautiful colors.
Gardens with wonderful scents and beautiful decor.
Nature is what gives us adventure.
Sure, it can be little venture.
But it shouldn't stop you from being part of Nature.
Nature is something we should love.
I know for sure that's what I love.

© 2016 SuMM3rGiRl777


Author's Note

SuMM3rGiRl777
This is something I came up with, because I love to be outdoors a lot. Nature's a part of it. Lol. ^_^ Hope you enjoy it. Comment whatever you want. :)

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SyN
Wow, I enjoyed every word's.
Great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved your poem.It has a kind of joyful feel to it. :) I really love travelling and seeing places. Not just any places.. places with scenic beauty and your poems describe excellently on the topic nature. It describes the things that we sometimes forget to notice and that's what I liked about your poem.
Keep writing more. :)
Would love to read more of your works. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nature is Life.
Nature is our Life.
We live in it.
We are surrounded by it.
We should nurture it.
Nature is beautiful.
Nature is amazing.
Nature is fruitful.
Nature is a blessing.

i love the question you put in first and then answering it one by one
very great style of writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful and vibrant poem! Loved the topic and the way you worked around it:) thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


We mostly forget that we have the most beautiful things around us and that is nature... I loved the fact that you kept a simple tone throughout the poem with your deep observations about nature, the little details you have shared are truly awesome... Poetry is about enjoying what you have inside by putting them on pages through ink drops and a touch of melodious creativity, and I believe you are doing it well my frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


SuMM3rGiRl777

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Thanks for the read. ^_^
finally a poem that cheers me up and makes me smile! not the usual drab about heart-break and suffering! thank you summer girl!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SuMM3rGiRl777

8 Years Ago

Lol. Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^ Thanks for the read.
I like your analysis on nature. Showing a simple love for the outdoors, and poetry doesn't always need to be super complicated.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SuMM3rGiRl777

8 Years Ago

Thanks! Yeah. Cool. Thanks for the read. ^_^
I like the focus on nature, very good thought process and point of view. Since your a new writer, I'm going to be more critical as I want to help you grow. The weak part of this poem was definitely the rhyming. In poetry its a nice topping, but don't ever force it. What matters in poetry is the meaning you put behind it like your focus on nature, while rhymes and the poems structure are just tools you can use to make it's impact more notable. Keep on writing, remember to use softer words when going for rhymes, and also remember it does not have to rhyme to be a work of art. Great job with the poem, the rest was strong and the feeling was their. I hope to read more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SuMM3rGiRl777

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate it, critical or not. Good to know. Thanks for the read. ^_^
unspokenpain

8 Years Ago

your welcome. ^.^
i enjoyd it :)
i live in the city now but i still love going into forests but the last time i did that i ran out of there because i show a bear

Posted 8 Years Ago


SuMM3rGiRl777

8 Years Ago

Glad you did. ^_^ And really?...wow. Thanks for the read.

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