Vacation

How about a vacation ^_^. He he.

Everyone needs a vacation.
A time to themselves and not worry about a thing.
Just to go to any location.
Maybe someone you can bring.
Go somewhere that's relaxing and exciting.
Maybe get a waxing or experience something delighting.
Be somewhere with great sighting.
Experience something new, something you never knew you could do.
Go hiking.
Go swimming.
Go swim in a beautiful river, with a beautiful waterfall.
Something beautiful can deliver.
Maybe swimming with the fishes can be wonderful.
Have a vacation that maybe can change your life.
A vacation is something where you'll never have a strife.
A vacation is something that probably everyone deserves.
It's something anyone would want to reserve.
So maybe one day, we can all have a vacation.
Without hesitation.

Author's Note

Another. ^_^ Hope you like it. Comment whatever you want. He he.

Reviews

[MrARKY89]

I believe the true appeal to vacations is escapism, to escape the pressure and demands of a typical, social life. We go to work, meeting the expectations of our supervisors and co-workers. We go home, meeting the expectations of our friends and members of family. We must also meet the expectations of strangers, acquaintances, potential employers, potential lovers, etc. A lot of expectations all around. Much like a poem or story, movie, song or game, a vacation gives us a time to breath, to emphasize who we are as individuals and our place in the world.

Again, this is more what of my thoughts in which the poem provoked and less than a review. But hey, if the poem gets one to think, than that is all it needs to be of quality.

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Cool. Thanks for the read. :)

[j_kool]

I take vacations often and it does free the mind of all the stress life throws at us. Love the idea of this piece. Superb!

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Awesome! Thanks for the read! ^_^

[Familiar Neko]

well i know i need one and this is a nice read

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Well thanks! Thanks for the read. ^_^

[nocool]

amen to all of that...
raises wine glass... when talking vacation
don't for get the must laugh


maybe a beautiful lady..
under crystal lights
dancing upon heavens sky

music of kisses in silence of the milky night
the mystery of heavens looking down on she and i
some night under heavens sky

enjoying a moment
she and I
birthed in forever memory
if but for a moment
her next to me.

that is a vacation
for me
;)
great write..
thanks for the inspiration of thought..

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Wow. Awesome! Thanks for the read . I'm glad you got inspired. ^_^

[nocool]

;)
I will get that vacation one day..

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

I hope you do. ^_^