delicious title ..instantly romantic and emotive says i! your haiku unfolds a breath of fresh air with that kiss ... i think i want one ;)))))))))))))))))) strictly speaking your second line needs two more syllables .. did you do that on purpose ... in rebellion?? ;)i really like this haiku ma'am!
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Hello, Summer! :)
My wife sometimes wears lavender scented eye coverings while she sleeps, so I know the feeling of lavender headbutts from goodnight kisses.
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So sweet that this made you think of your wife in such a cute personal way. Something only you could.. read moreSo sweet that this made you think of your wife in such a cute personal way. Something only you could know. Your Haiku was the one that inspired me to write one. Thanks for reading!
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A little about me, I am a broke college student who uses poetry as an outlet.
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