I've read & written a ton of poems about pets & this is high on originality. It's clever of you to begin with the comparison of the 2 cats as a way to show just how over the top Puff is. Working with contrasts is a compelling way to show and emphasize. It almost feels as if you are in cahoots with Puff, possibly encouraging these unruly behaviors, & between the lines we read that YOU are the ringleader of sass & defiance here, while using your cat as your fall guy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
You're such an excellent reviewer! Always some analysis that I love. Thanks for reading
3 Years Ago
Thank you for the kudos. It's something I enjoy doing *smile*
This is such a great, intricate and detailed piece that tells us so much without making it too descriptive! By the cat's name, we get the feel of who they are, but your words add so much more and prove to anyone doubting it, cats and animals do have personalities. I love cats, too and they can be so silly and entertaining at times!
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3 Years Ago
Thank you! She got her name because when I first got her she was shaved and her head was just this l.. read moreThank you! She got her name because when I first got her she was shaved and her head was just this little 'puff' and I originally gave her another name, but Puff just stuck. It was too fitting. And cats have such personalities! not saying dogs don't but I have had many cats in my lifetime and they were all drastically different.
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I've read & written a ton of poems about pets & this is high on originality. It's clever of you to begin with the comparison of the 2 cats as a way to show just how over the top Puff is. Working with contrasts is a compelling way to show and emphasize. It almost feels as if you are in cahoots with Puff, possibly encouraging these unruly behaviors, & between the lines we read that YOU are the ringleader of sass & defiance here, while using your cat as your fall guy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
You're such an excellent reviewer! Always some analysis that I love. Thanks for reading
3 Years Ago
Thank you for the kudos. It's something I enjoy doing *smile*
The Cafe' says your a writer to watch :) so i stopped to check out your stuff.
ahahaha damn cats indeed .. and how we love our pets .. i am a dog person myself .. but my sister and a "Puff" .. oh my .. she was Queen above all and how dare one approach without having permission .. she had 7 toes on each front paw and 6 on each back .. had 49 kittens during her life and everyone was Polydactic (i think that's the word. sure enjoyed you write .. nice to meet you . i'm
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Oooh love this
I used to have cats as a child I had two
One was called minty black and white markings on his paws and a few other places and weenie was a tortoiseshell colour
I was allergic but mum used to dose w
Me with poloramime prob too many lol but I only ever had two in my life loved them
So lovely to read your poem I really loved it thanks 🙏
Hello, Summer! :)
Thanks for sharing your cat with us. Puff seems like fun. I had a cat, growing up. Her name was Katie. We were the same age. As a boy, id chase her through the yard with water guns. As a teenager, id often wake up with her sleeping above my head, having taken my pillow. She lived 21 years.
May the force be with you.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
in my house we say "live long and prosper" lol
She's a hoot, she might be a pain in my butt b.. read morein my house we say "live long and prosper" lol
She's a hoot, she might be a pain in my butt but she makes me laugh and keeps me happy, and she also steals my pillow from me lol.
Hello!
A little about me, I am a broke college student who uses poetry as an outlet.
I want to one day own my own little coffee shop but being a barista at a little family-owned coffee shop will d.. more..