I will walk yet

I will walk yet

A Poem by Sumit

Thorns will come and roads will block,
To keep me with the creeping flock,
But I have made my mind set
and I will walk yet.

Minor losses will be there,
Disapointments may adhere,
But I will see my golden gate 
and I will walk yet.

Pessimism may come close,
And I may fall on my nose,
But every time I'll stand up straight,
and I will walk yet.

© 2013 Sumit


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A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The best of us always get back up well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very good poem. I like the logic of the words. We will fall down many times in a life. A wise person get up stronger and they tried not to repeat the mistakes. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sumit

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your valuable comment.
I enjoy your use of simple clean wording, well done,good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sumit

11 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas for your constructive review. Well, this is my first english poem and you are the f.. read more
Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

well it's very enjoyable, well done.

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Sumit
Sumit

Bangalore, South, India



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I am a simple yet fun loving guy who likes travelling and interacting with people. I strongly believe that Honesty is the best Policy and I don't like cheating people. more..


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