The Seeking of revenge.

The Seeking of revenge.

A Poem by I love you; just not today.

Wish I was a white sheep,
But I'm not.
Want to fall asleep ...
But what I see behind my eyelids;
Drives me mad,
Darkness slowly creeping.
Wake the night,
Eyes red from weeping,
Lingering in dreams and terrors.
Of all the things I had,
This cold numb feeling broken,
By pain coursing through my veins,
Beauties left unspoken.
Of all our wishes and our lies,
As we indulge in sin.
The blood on my hands tainted,
With your hate and fear ...
Strokes of black quickly painted.
On our lives and hearts plunged into,
Desperation once again.
The dead bodies piled around us,
Reeking of revenge.
Is where the manhunt finally found us,
Hand in hand with dying screams and gunshots,
We meet our end.

© 2008 I love you; just not today.


Author's Note

I love you; just not today.
Reveiw please.

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It's so dark, so beautiful. I love this piece.
The description in it paints a very vivid picture, leaving me
lost in your mind. I can feel, hear and see everything you wrote.
Amazing work !

♥Kriss

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 31, 2008
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