Metanoia

Metanoia

A Poem by Sultry
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"written 09/12/19"

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I use words to water the seed of mind
That plant trees with fruit for life
With roots to revive hearts paralyzed
In soil beds of field paradigms

© 2019 Sultry


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Hi sultry. You've got a promising idea here. A metaphor comparing the power of words to influence the mind with the growth of a plant. However I'm afraid I don't get your last line.
Regards.
Alan


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Sultry

5 Years Ago

Hi Alan, "a person's paradigm is how they see the world based on all the information that they have .. read more
alanwgraham

5 Years Ago

Thanks Sultry. Yes I can see what you're getting at and I think it's a promising analogy. Ive recent.. read more

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