Rain

4-20-19

Somedays there are hurricanes that go on inside my brain.

When my thoughts are caged all I feel is pain from the rage.

Now I wish that it would rain, to cool this inner flame.

Before I suffocate and it takes my life away.

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Beautiful!
I like your expression, they are expository enough to explicate the mystery that lies behind this poetic piece.

When thoughts are in cage, we feel unease, every other things remain unaware of. What the body would be concentrating on is freeing the caged thought.

It's obnoxious to have a thought locked up at somewhere unknown, because, if the thoughts is free, the mind will flow and the pen will write rightly.

Nice one here, Sultry.

[Ezekiel]

Hi this is Ezekiel street knowledge da prophet deep i felt that!