Midnight Verses

Written from my QWERTY-less cell-phone...so don't bother if it's a bit over-laconic

I awake, you slumber

In our worlds of two colours

I cringe like a dog

A eunuch in your harem...

You slaughter; in orgies with dames.

I hesitate in hopes, wade in fears.

You, garrulous, feel not alone from cheers.

My wistful sun rises timidly once in a day...

Where there no night of fear for you but when

You're only priapic to play. 

Reviews

[Black Ink]

Good Job :)

[Derek S.Keck]

I love the flow of imagry you create in this piece.

I cringe like a dog

A eunuch in your harem...

You slaughter; in orgies with dames.


You're an amazing poet with talent beyond most poets that I've ever met.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Thought thinking and a strong write within these lines in this poem... good write, differently said.

[Priyanka Natesh]

This one is..... scary. :D It's a little too melancholy for me. But a very good poem from Sujash once more. Thank you :)
Take Care.

[Kathryn]

Strong words (you would not believe how many times i managed to type 'string words' befor getting that right xD) that definately get straight to the point. The flow was soft and gentle, to combat the strong words, and all in all, i'm really impressed. Great work, well done :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and strong words. Sometime better to write words down the to speak them a loud.
"I cringe like a dog
A eunuch in your harem...
You slaughter; in orgies with dames."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[T.W. Early]

Very good! Like the rhyming!

[Ripple of Aqua]

I love all of the adjectives used; gives every and anything its own character. There's fear and darkness that you shun from. A little sad but all the same brilliant!