Dazzling Darkness

Published in the Daily Star's Rising Stars : http://www.thedailystar.net/rising/2008/01/01/back.htm

Fireflies, they all went meek,
Seven skies, they roam around to seek,
Something, for they've grown weak.
So they knelt down before
The overwhelming darkness,
They've already stopped
Emitting light, nonetheless,
The darkness
Which I fear to face.
And the darkness
Shows its ominous grace,
From the darkness
None struggles to surface,
Nevertheless
I Grasped hold of
The eternal fire,
Which vanquishes darkness
It's only my desire.
I stared at it,
But it made my good hopes split.
I felt the dazzling glaze
Burning my eyes, it's darkness

Reviews

[Derek S.Keck]

Powerful write. The imagry you create with your words is astounding, it seems to have a beautiful mystic quality to it all. Well done!

[Sukriti Suki]

This is a nice one!! Darkness is glazing in the eyes...very creative.