Broken Toy

Broken Toy

A Poem by Amanda

I’m just a broken toy,
Laying on the floor,
Unwanted and abused,
Cause everyone knows,
Broken toys don’t work.

They try to be fine,
But you can tell something’s off,
In the way that they talk,
The way that they move.
So you leave them alone,
Stowed away with little cracks that just get bigger.

I’m just a broken toy,
Laying on the floor,
Everyone uses me,
But no one takes care.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
This is kinda crappy

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i like broken toys, because I will fix them so they can be taken care of :) Wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


crappy? I think not that was actually really good i love the perspective of atoy and the emotion was great how a toy can feel pain and neglect i loved it and don't ever diss your writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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