Released

Okay, um, this was written in one of my more depressed moments. Kinda embarrassed, just so you know, it has nothing to do with ANY of my friends who might read this, *coughSophiecoughcough*

If for a second you cared,
Had you dared ,
Maybe I’d still be here,
Waiting for another leer,
But no, I’m gone,
I left just before dawn,
In the darkest hour,
Where the joy of life has gone

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I wish I didn't have to say goodbye to you. I read many of your beautiful poems and then I come across ones like this, still beautiful, and I feel like I'm losing you to your emotions and death that follows...... I LOVE the way your poems are sharp, straight, and affecting to the point that they play with my emotions the way they do!! : ) Awesome job...... xoxo -Mark

[Jordan's Back]

This is another Piece filled with Depth and darkness. a wonderful Expressive piece. Excellent

[Sophie]

This is really good! I love the last three lines! and lol on the description haha