His Secret

sloppy poem i wrote

You think you’re the only one,

But darling you’re not so special.

He’s cheating on you, hun.

To him you’re just another level.

Like on a game he wants to beat,

He makes all the lies sugary sweet,

Well maybe you wanna take a seat,

So I can tell you he’s also dating me.

No, you don’t believe it?

Well go ahead and be my guest,

See how all the pieces fit?

Put your worries to rest,

Because everything you thought is true.

He doesn’t really love you.

Author's Note

i didnt say a name but i don't have to, do i?

Reviews

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

one comment!
Ouch! :

Good one

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This definitely hurt me even more.. Umm, wow, powerful words you got there. Strong emotion.

[Amanda]

sorry didn't mean to hurt you. this poem is dedicated to all the clueless girls out there that are with a******s like ****

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

It's fine, on top of all the crap from before, a little more hurt doesn't really seem like anything. I'm kinda numb from all of it by now. It just brought back stuff, and pain, but it's fine.

[Amanda]

just wait till you get past the numb its a lot more fun and you're a bit more careless towards it

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I don't want to be careless.. I want to be happy. Like I was. Before all of this :/

[Amanda]

well just keep enduring it even though it hurts i have a feeling you'll be happy one day maybe soon

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh wow. I love this poem. Its got some bite and fire to it.

[Amanda]

shank ya