Do You Still Love Me?

You say that you love me,

But I wonder if that's true.

All these pretty girls I see,

All of them hang on you.

You said we'd be forever,

Our love would never die.

Then my trust you sever...

Was everything a lie?

I knew I never deserved your love,

I knew you were too great.

Your love pure white like a dove,

But its begun to dull as of late.

You say that you love me,

But I wonder if that's true.

All these pretty girls I see,

All of them hang on you.

You said we'd be forever,

Our love would never die.

Then my trust you sever...

Was everything a lie?

I know your past was so rough,

I know you need something lovely.

But I won't ever be enough,

The problem is I am me.

You say that you love me,

But I wonder if that's true.

All these pretty girls I see,

All of them hang on you.

You said we'd be forever,

Our love would never die.

Then my trust you sever...

Was everything a lie?

Sometimes at night I lay and cry,

Because you've always helped me through,

But I never seem to help you do anything but sigh.

My one wish is to be good enough for you.

You say that you love me,

But I wonder if that's true.

All these pretty girls I see,

All of them hang on you.

You said we'd be forever,

Our love would never die.

Then my trust you sever...

Was everything a lie?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Very sad... Beautifully written.

[KeeD]

Still love you manda :D.
This poem has so much emotion but then again all your poems do. You're talented. I just want to see you in a happy place :)

[CreativeStroke]

Beautiful emotions portrayed here!

"But its begun to dull as of late." I don't think you need the word 'but' in this line. It broke the flow of your piece for me and I think your point gets across without the 'but' being there. Just a suggestion though!

Well done with this writing Mandabear!

[Nick.B]

Interesting poem, usually the person who really loves you back comes back, he just needs time to find himself, probably he's not doing nothing/probably he's doing everything but eventually he will be back...anyway well done

[de_maruf]

excellent

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful heartfelt write about the often one sided nature of love. Nice work

[teardrop]

wow such a heartfelt write, very emotional. Great job expressing yourself!

[K-mo]

a very sad heartfelt piece for sure, and well written. Thanks for sharing!

[Joey Sturgill]

i feel for you, sounds like young love, one that needs to heal, which will take time. You find that person that understands you as a person, then when you lose them, your life as a whole begins to crumble. Loved the poem, great job.

[Amanda]

Thanks

[Rhea752]

this is an amazing poem!!! you can feel the hurt :( i hope no one actually did that to you and if so... who do i need to beat up!!!

[Amanda]

Thanks Rhea xD