Cheater

Cheater

A Poem by Amanda
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You're a liar and a cheat,
You're playing a game you can't beat,
When will you ever learn?
Oh well, it's your turn. 

You think you're one step ahead,
Careful, one more step and you're dead. 
You think I don't know?
Tic, tac, toe, three in a row.

You thought we were the perfect fit,
But changed your mind when you saw her tits. 
Try to lie, just one more time,
Your pleas ring out a stupid chime. 
 
Did you think I would forgive you?
Woops, I forgot you're an idiot too.
You're a liar and a cheat,
Checkmate, it looks like you've been beat.

© 2012 Amanda


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Amanda
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This is awesome! Totally captured the feels of getting cheated on. Sucks, doesn't it? Anyways, good write
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
LOVE IT!!!!! ^_^ its just.... AWESOME!!!!!

and the pic is true, being cheated on really does do that to you... :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Tanks :D
Abbie

12 Years Ago

welcome! :D
This was a nice piece. The flow was nice, and the game metaphor worked great too. I don't have any cortiques, good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Shanks bro :)
David the writer

12 Years Ago

Np, Amanda.

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Added on November 22, 2012
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Tags: Lying, liar, cheat, cheating, games

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