I Just Don't Know

Too many things to think of, not enough space in my head to think them.

I have too many things on my mind, yes it’s true.

Maybe I just need to take a break from life.

I honestly don't know what to do,

I can't repair what I know I have tore,

I just cannot take this damage   anymore.

Author's Note

I'm a little iffy on this one, not sure if I like it that much. Thoughts?

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

This is totally how I felt back in 4thish grade. Amazing write.... Keep it up

[Sunny Skye]

I like it it has feeling in it. I think its good. Lol i agree with Brittany as well i am always thinking about something no matter what it is. Good poem.

-SkyeBlanco

[Brittany DeFranco]

I really like it too, it expresses your thoughts, do you have running thoughts too? Cause that's what I have, I cannot stop thinking EVER, it's really hard for me

[Allycat]

I really like this one, it's an emotional piece. This is very relatable, wonderful job Amanda
I like how you highlighted the words " I just don't know anymore" very creative..
I hope you feel better