I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by Amanda
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Why have you suddenly stopped talking to me? It hurts...

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It seems like forever since we last talked,

Maybe it has been, I don’t know,

Are you alright? My past few nights haven’t rocked.

Are you ignoring me? Was I just too much?

It hurts that you won’t even call,

Do I not even deserve that anymore?

Do you even miss me at all?

I miss you terribly,

There’s no doubt about that,

 Too much of you is in my head,

Thoughts buzzing around like gnats.

I can’t stop thinking of our memories,

When we were all having fun.  

One time we even stayed out all night,

Racing home with the rising sun.

Are you giving up on me?

Is this your way of saying goodbye?

Maybe it’s best you don’t say anything,

I don’t want to taint our memories as one big lie.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
For some people I miss :(
Anyways, I promise I'll resume writing various chapters now that I've written this. Reviews would be greatly appreciated :)

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Yup, I know the feeling. It sucks and eats you alive D: Good poem though :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
I hate feeling like this, and I have way too many times.
It's written well though, nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Pi Cee

12 Years Ago

Welcome =)
I did not need to read this now...
It's good writing tho

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Sorry, kind of really missing some people right now and I can't stand it anymore so I had to write t.. read more
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

It's ok
And ur welcome
very nice, a lot of ppl can relate to this,,,good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thanks:)

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