I Miss You

Why have you suddenly stopped talking to me? It hurts...

It seems like forever since we last talked,

Maybe it has been, I don’t know,

Are you alright? My past few nights haven’t rocked.

Are you ignoring me? Was I just too much?

It hurts that you won’t even call,

Do I not even deserve that anymore?

Do you even miss me at all?

I miss you terribly,

There’s no doubt about that,

 Too much of you is in my head,

Thoughts buzzing around like gnats.

I can’t stop thinking of our memories,

When we were all having fun.  

One time we even stayed out all night,

Racing home with the rising sun.

Are you giving up on me?

Is this your way of saying goodbye?

Maybe it’s best you don’t say anything,

I don’t want to taint our memories as one big lie.

Author's Note

For some people I miss :(
Anyways, I promise I'll resume writing various chapters now that I've written this. Reviews would be greatly appreciated :)

Reviews

[:DI laugh too much:D]

I know exactly how you feel, I have friends who have stopped talking to me for no reason, so this poem is definitely relatable. Your emotions are really powerful in this piece.

You're a great writer, keep up the good work, and stay strong :]

[Harley (arbiter)]

Pretty good poem. I've been there before. It'll get better

[Tabitha t]

great emotions. well written and to the point. Kudos for this. great talent

[Racy Daniel]

So nice poem, nice wording and meaningful topic on which you have written your poem. Carry on.

[Ahmad Cox]

I could feel the heartfelt emotion in every line

[h d e rushin]

"When we were all having fun,
one time we even stayed out all night,
Racing home with the rising sun"


I just love those three lines.........dana

[afra]

i love it .... i miss some one too ....anyway ...great write

[Allycat]

Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it. I agree with Laury Hitch, your message was very clear and concise. Not talking to someone who means a lot to you sucks, hopefully they will make their way back into your life again
Well written, great job!