For The Better

For The Better

A Poem by Amanda
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I don't know what to think anymore, I am so confused and nervous and excited. Thank you, Megan, by the way.

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My head hurts and my body aches,
I have nothing left, nothing at all,
But still someone manages to put a smile on my face.
It’s amazing how everything comes back,
All the moments I forgot,
The simple little things I never thought I would.

Things have been tough, things have been so rough,
I lose sight almost every day of what matters,
Can’t even count the times I’ve thought of the cabinet downstairs,
Or realized how little people actually care.
I feel so sore, yet memories make me stronger,
Filling me with hope I once had.

Inside jokes and little moments,
The weeks we spent laughing, sure we would never stop.
All these things have melted away from me,
Leaving a deeper sadness than before,
But it’s alright, because I think things might actually be okay.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
My brain is literally going haywire with the events of the past week. I don't know what to think anymore.

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I really love this! Its always good to have hope because it's what keeps us going :) I can really relate to this, and so can many of other people.
"My head hurts and my body aches,
I have nothing left, nothing at all,
But still someone manages to put a smile on my face."
Awesome write! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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honest, kinda sad, but real and hopeful...very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its sorrowful and honest but I love the tinge of hope in here as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it a lot too. Real and heartfelt

and honest

That's really all you can ask for

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thanks
This is a very strong emotional piece of work. Well done and yes things always get better. The great thing about being human is we can endure things unimaginable and grow stronger from them.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thank you, and I'm still waiting for things to get better
I really love this! Its always good to have hope because it's what keeps us going :) I can really relate to this, and so can many of other people.
"My head hurts and my body aches,
I have nothing left, nothing at all,
But still someone manages to put a smile on my face."
Awesome write! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
i can relate to this poem ....well done ...i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on September 8, 2012
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