Troy

Troy

A Poem by Amanda
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Poem about Troy, duh.

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This is a big step for me, seriously.

The hardest thing I’ve ever had to do,

Is learn that the key,

Is saying, “I forgive you.”

 

Only that isn’t true,

Because that implies we’re okay.

I still f*****g hate you, dude,

I just hate her more and more each day.

 

The things you did are horrible,

And I’ll never be able to see,

Why she thought you were so adorable,

But it wasn’t her you hated, it was me.

 

Even still, you never saw it coming,

Until the three of us were already gone.

Just so you know, she’s still slumming,

But now it’s with a different guy to con.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
dfufugbfv I hate when I can't get the words out. This is the best I could do. Reviews are highly appreciated :)

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Amazing poem! Hope you'll find some better people to care for!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Oh... I thought it was a boyfriend or something! :-)
Amanda

12 Years Ago

ew dear god no haha
Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

Haha!
I think you got the message out well. It was straightforward. nicely done!! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very blunt. I love it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem slaps you round the face! Raw and Fresh love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very heartfelt and honest. I really liked it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i thought it was nice. :) great job, Amanda

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a lovely write ....i loved it ...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely lovethe third line in the second stanza. Just love :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda

12 Years Ago

ahh yeah after the whole locker fiasco, i decided to just ask if it was okay if i sat there
Sophie

12 Years Ago

locker fiasco?
Amanda

12 Years Ago

ah yeah, the reason i like hated high school? Today washorrible

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