Forgiveness

A double haiku

 

I know what to do,

I have to let it all go,

Say, “I forgive you.”

 

If I never say it,

I’ll lose me bit by bit,

So there- now you know.

Author's Note

I needed to write something about forgiveness and this is the best I can do. Now I can finally write what I've been trying to all day. Reviews please?

Reviews

[Megan]

short and sweet yet captured the main issue with unforgiveness--it eats at us. admire its shortness and how all you needed to say was captured in it. it's a tool i wish i had.

thank you for this poem! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Forgiveness can be a powerful thing for the person giving and receiving it.

[Steven Cash]

I liked it. Very well written Amanda