Hate

Hate

A Poem by Amanda
"

I hate you for what you've made me

"

I was so stupid to think

You could actually change,

That maybe it was just a weak link;

 He just made you act strange.

 

I should’ve known it would never last,

You won’t ever be there for me,

That’s always been in the past.

Lucky for me I finally see.

 

I’m leaving tonight,

I’ll have to come back,

But I’ll be free to fly like a kite,

And not care what I lack.

 

Whatever this was,

It’s over now, said and done,

You’ll do what a snake does,

And I’ll always be on the run.

 

I know I can’t ever fully escape,

But maybe I can always be one step ahead.

There will always be a hole agape,

Because to each other, we are both dead.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
I know this isn't that great, but I need to get my feelings out and this is the best I can do. I just...I am so fucking sick of everything. I have a feeling I'll be out sooner than later.

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Very powerful and heartfelt

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this, especially the last two stanzas. Very powerful

Posted 12 Years Ago


That sounds like me and my mom's relationship...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

12 Years Ago

Our moms would make great friends then
Dark and Mysterious

12 Years Ago

Really? lol :)

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