That One Moment

That One Moment

A Poem by Amanda
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In your one great moment, there will always be disappointment.

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When that moment comes,
You will have to act,
Do something, anything.
You’ll look around,
Feel the success,
And smile.

Or maybe you won’t.
You’ll see through all the happy,
And notice absence.
You’ll look around,
Feel your heart drop,
And still smile.

Because in the end,
In that one moment,
That really matters,
You’ll look around,
And realize the truth.
You are all alone.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
"The more things change, the more they fucking stay the same." -Tara, when Pam tells her she's basically to do her bidding because Pam is the maker.

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Yes we are all alone yet are able to stand together if we seize the moment and let others in... Inevitably, we will experience everything, life and death alone for no one really knows what lies beneath the smile or grimace of another. In a mind's eye, only truth is known to the mind who holds it. nicely done and thought provoking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Amanda, I think you did a very successful job of painting the irony of certain situations in life. We all have moments and trials that assess our very cores, and I think you portrayed that very vividly, my dear:) Great job, and keep me updated with your work.

-Cord

Posted 12 Years Ago


True blood is the best. Nice work dearie, I like this write a lot, i can relate to this oh so very easy.

Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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