Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Amanda
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Based off of Kill Myself by TM

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I can’t take it anymore,
This is all just too much.
So I’m shutting the door,
Please don’t act on your hunch.

I’m not sorry.
Not one little bit.
What else can I say,
I can’t survive another hit.

This is not some cry for help,
It’s goodbye, I wish you well.
I’m going to kill myself.

© 2012 Amanda


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This kinda reminds me of when me and my dad are fighting(b*****d) I get so mad that I wanna kill myself or do something terrible, so I can kind of relate. Great work!!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


okay... you're scaring me. go write a happy poem. please!! :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on July 9, 2012
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