I'm Sick

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think this is actually a very clever poem. Your use of the word 'schizophrenia' is, I think, an ironic play on the word. We all of us hear our 'inner voice' all of the time. In the illness of schizophrenia that 'inner voice' goes wrong. Your poem is particularly poignant ,because in the Illness, that 'voice' is often heard when one is alone. I very much doubt if you have actually got schizophrenia .......have you?

[Suhd]

I am actually schizophrenic, it's been two years of it.
But thank you for the compliments.

[Great Aunt Astri]

So was I! But my diagnosis was changed when it was discovered that I am Milk and Grain intolerant (I have not got the enzymes to digest it.) But I was ill for years and years, in and out of hospital, and I got to know a lot of other mentally ill people. It was, actually, an incredible learning experience. There were some wonderful people, and I got to learn empathy for those who were suffering. I sincerely hope you are not in too bad away. Just try not to take it too seriously ..... and keep writing!

[Suhd]

Thanks for the support and kindness and sharing your story with me.
I wish you good mental health. And I will keep writing, thanks again:)

[barleygirl]

WOW! I can't even say a word becuz this conversation says it all! I wasn't sure how to read this poem, so I was looking to see how others read it. This is a mind-blowing share. I'm recovering from a brain injury . . . it's taken 6 years since neck surgery mm's from brain stem. It's great to have some of my memory & functionality back, but like you say, Astri, now I have the UTMOST regard for those with memory issues. You really don't know how it is until it happens to you. My very best to you both (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Great Aunt Astri]

Lovely to see you here, Barleygirl. Sometimes affliction, or should I say 'adversity' can be very helpful. It is surprising what people have to deal with!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Having worked with many schizophrenic people I can relate to this one. It has a poignancy, a stark down to earth this is what it is.

[Suhd]

Thank you John. Glad you stopped by.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful
Love it
Thanks for sharing

[Suhd]

Thank you.

[Wild Rose]

I like the picture of a single track railway
It is a bit hazy > is that you
Single, Alone ?
even in a crowd
Hazy feel to be in another place

[Suhd]

Thanks my friend. Yeah, even in a crowd.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very clever poem. I suffer from mental illnesses due to my upbringing and I’ve also been diagnosed with schizophrenia.

[Suhd]

I appreciate your review and I totally empathize with you friend. Wish you good health!

[¿]

Endless depth residing in this write....
Schizophrenia is no normal illness but a messy and confusing condition of mind and senses....that means you've included an intense loneliness here....
Thanks for sharing this one! :)

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot Tahsin. You understood well :)

[¿]

You're welcome!😇😇

[Coyote Poetry]

Illness can be fought if we know we have. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts my friend.
Coyote

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot, my friend :)

[.]

Very deep words, Suhd.

I like the presentation of this piece; those lonely railtracks passing through an Autumn falling is very symbolic of the words and the illness. Whatever the case, there is no disputing the beauty of your poetry. It is as clear as a Summer Sky.

Nicely conceived, my friend.

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot, Doodley! You are so kind.

[Giulia King]

I love how short this poem is but it's so god damn powerful. Well done!

[Suhd]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

It is an affliction indeed. God help those who have it. Need medical attention. Short and powerful.

[Suhd]

Amen to that. Thanks for stopping by.