You and I

Remains of love

I am a Grecian Palace,

And the Sweet-Musty Scent that accompanies it

Is You.

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

What an exotic way of putting it! Unique and original.

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot, once again.

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything needed in the short poem. Perfect ending to the outstanding poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot friend for such encouraging words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Elizabeth]

Short, sweet and to the point.
Thank you for sharing

[EJ's Horror]

A brief but heartfelt poem :)

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot :)

[emmajoy]

A brief masterpiece about.. the senses.

[Suhd]

Thanks for reading !

[.]

Nicely written in much limited words. Great work

[Suhd]

Thank you Raas !

[.]

You're welcome

[H L Rose]

I think this is just a really nice, simple poem, and I don’t have much to say, because there is nothing I find bad and everything that I find good... and I just think this is pure dead lovely.

Enjoyed.

[Suhd]

Thank you Hannah for this nice review. I'm glad that you liked it.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Musty musk? I can smell it just beautiful- soft deep and enviting- wonderful words-🌹

[Suhd]

Thank you so much :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[.]

Sweet or musty? That is the question!

For a sweet scent will increase the splendour of your palace and a musty smell will diminish it.

Clever write.

[Suhd]

You're totally right. Thanks my friend :)

[Voice]

These 4 lines can be interpreted in a 1000 different ways. I don't know which one to go with. :p I think this is an attribute of a good writing. :)

[Suhd]

Thank you so much for all the compliments. They mean a lot coming from a gifted writer :)
Btw, the poem consists of 3 lines not 4 :-)

[Voice]

You're welcome. I am humbled :)
Oh sorry, it appeared as 4 lines in my phone.

[Suhd]

Oh it's fine!