The Serenade

Cologne, the dulcet showers

hit the panoramic pane

As she stands behind the window 

under which I stood and sang.

They're bewitchingly analogous,

Ergo their names I switched,

From now on April is her name

Reviews

[Drowning In Reality]

Very nicely written. Bravo

[Suhd]

Thanks for the review!

[Rachid Amrani]

Thank you sir. I do appreciate your kind words. It means a lot to me. And It was pleasure reviewing your work. Keep up the good work.

Rachid

[Rachid Amrani]

A very creative piece of work. The words you used created a rhythm that is breath taking. And each line flows smoothly and connects to the next line.

Good work.

Rachid

[Suhd]

Thanks much Rachid.

[Rachid Amrani]

You're welcome.