The Serenade

Cologne, the dulcet showers

hit the panoramic pane

As she stands behind the window 

under which I stood and sang.

They're bewitchingly analogous,

Ergo their names I switched,

From now on April is her name

Reviews

[Giulia King]

You write beautifully! Every piece from you is so unique :)

[Chris Shaw]

You have stirred my senses with this delightful write. A short poem and yet it is rich in imagery and feeling. I wanted to be her standing at the window, while being serenaded. Lovely work. Romantic and uplifting.

Chris

[Suhd]

I'm glad I could. Thank you so much.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The dulcet showers, the cologne serenade all the senses. April was never portrayed this beautifully.

[Suhd]

Ah! I'm humbled by this, my friend!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Richly deserved praise Suhd!

[Karmee]

This is beautiful in it's unique way. Love this

[Suhd]

Thank you so much :)

[Zoya]

Hmm...I see you got a strange penchant for switching one's name with 'april'!! Lol...really don't know why. This piece certainly left me wondering. It is very beautifully written though. Great stuff!

[Suhd]

Zoe, I wanted to portray the poetic beauty. April is spring and sweet fragrance and beauty, so that's why...Thanks for leaving a nice review!

[Zoya]

Ah, I see. Very welcome!

[conversations with her ..]

THIS.

im a fan, this was beautiful

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A nice piece of Romanticism.

Made me think of Romeo serenading Juliet underneath her balcony in the moonlight.

Some excellent words used in this piece to create the mood beyond the simplicity of the content.

Nice work.

[Suhd]

Thanks much Doodley :)

[Sami Khalil]

You create scenes and images and then cherished names. Fulfilling...:)..................

[Suhd]

Thank you Sami for your review...!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. The words led to good place and ending. I like how you use words. Made the reader feel the place and the wonder. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Suhd]

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you liked it !

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wow...wonderful work suhd..i loved it!

[Suhd]

Thanks a ton Wajiha :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure suhd!