What Is Wrong?

What Is Wrong?

A Poem by Shingo
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I just was dumped by my girlfriend of 5 years, and it seems that alot i thought i knew was truth with her was actually false.

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Will  tomorrow be worth living,
When the world has just crashed in.
Can anything make sense,
When everything you thought you knew,
Was flawed all along.
Now the world seems simply wrong.

 

Mistakes you’ve made,
That once only haunted,
Have finally made their presence known.
Every flaw clearly shown.
When just staying alive takes effort,
How can tomorrow be worth living?

 

The only thing that mattered,

Taken away in a heartbeat.
No future left in this life.
No one hoping for my return.
Nothing left to be giving,
Tomorrow cannot be worth living.
 

© 2008 Shingo


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Do you know the feeling?
Everything being a lie
When everything done was worth nothing
And the world breaks and you dont breath
Nothing feels alive...except the pain...

Nobody is there, but you are never alone... - From One Pain to Another, FallenAngelJC

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Shingo
Shingo

Adelaide, Australia



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Um. Well, I've been writing for a few years now, trying to come out with something worth reading, and i am an avid reader of pretty much anything. I like writing, almost regardless of what it is that .. more..

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