Nobody knows?

Nobody knows?

The moon is broken tonight,

 It has that stupid crack.

The wind, a bit too cold,

The night, a bit too black.

The stars are stealing away their glance,

Trying to escape my confrontation

Of broken trust,

Look how some have become so dim!

And some are hiding behind

Those clouds of dust.

The trees have bowed down,

And they are whispering quietly,

"We don't have the answers you need,

But we do feel pity."

And then there are those little flowers,

Who have closed their eyes,

In innocent hope of being passed by unseen,

I guess even they don't know,

Why we hurt,

Why life gets mean?

There is lightening in the sky,

But the rain seems to be in a fix,

Wondering maybe, what would it say,

If I ask for answers I long?

What blunder did I commit,

Where did I go wrong?

A few birds are flying here and there,

Mocking my inability to fly

And reach elsewhere.

Somewhere,

 Where old friends don't turn their faces away,

Somewhere, 

Where the night is as faithful, as the day.

Author's Note

This is highly exaggerated I know!
Wrote it just for fun!
Thoughts are welcome :)

Reviews

[The Surrealist inside ...]

Exaggerated .. I dont think so .. This is beautifully written ..
Let me be a little more familiar with my Guitar and I promise I will sing this to you ..
It is that beautiful .. Its more like a Progressive rock Song ..
I loved it .. Thanks for making me Read it

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

Whenever you feel like this....You can talk to me......I am here to share...Lolz......joking..........

This is just a great piece which shows that there is something inside the heart. You may call this an exaggeration and wrote it for fun but the way you shaped up the conditions and the poem .... it says that there is something hidden between the lines. It might be a belief , an experience or a thought which sprouted because of something.

I really loved this poem......Keep up the good work Gal.... :D ........

amazing read..like

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A crushin piece that leads the reader one a wonder of imagery, a well written piece, well done.

[L. Edward Neale]

Great meditaiton on nature and emotions. Reminds me of a great chinese Zen Buddhist quote I once read: a student is telling his master "but the sound of the rain is a sermon. "No, the sound of the rain is you giving yourself a sermon."

[❀ Gabriela ..]

This is really brilliant! I love the imagery and how you expressed this, excellent poem! :)

[Amata Luna]

Whoa lovely. This is really beautiful. Each line is just perfect. Each word an ingredient to a sense of perfection. Each is brought into an amazing end and a part that will always be remembered: Somewhere, Where the night is as faithful, as the day...

[$êlvån]

Superlike :)u simply play wit nature:)loved d way it went n a hopefull hope.hats off dear:)

[Supernova]

I like this. I get a similar feeling (though I can't express it as poetically) whenever I'm sad and decide to talk a walk outside. Nicely written :)

[Kes]

I love this!
Brilliant piece of work.
K

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I'm not sure this is exaggerated - all I know is I like it! You've created some beautiful images in here. Specifically, I like the last stanza the best. It really makes me wonder about that magical land where friends are tolerant and respectful of our choices, and where they don't turn back on us because we're not the same as they are.
An awesome write.