Something, someday

Something, someday.

Something tells me, I can.

Something tells me I will.

Something tells me I'll make it there,

Something tells me I'll kill,

All my fears, which hold me back,

Despite the weaknesses, 

the perfection which I lack.

Shut all those, who think, 

I'm not good enough.

All those who say,

I wont make it through the rough.

Someday, I would have moved the mountain,

Someday, I would have crossed the fence,

Someday, it will all prove to be worth,

Someday, it will all make sense.

I know I have it somewhere,

What makes me different from others,

By own unique bit,

Someday, I know,

I would have found it.

Author's Note

Random!

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I love the uplifting sense throughout this poem, just a flow of positive feelings. Many times have I questioned myself, whether I'm worth it, but it's really good to feel good about yourself, others may have the perfect life, perfect lifestyle, perfect popularity, but even the most perfect people seem cowardly when they confront someone who is happy. It doesn't matter where you're from or what you do, but who you are, and if everyone feels good about themselves, there will be no need for living to impress others. Great poem, it has a strength, an independence, which I admire.

[sarah]

This is a really strong and motivational poem great work!

[Shimotsuma Akimoto]

very nice!

[Priya]

Always keep the flame alive! We have it in us to change not just ourselves, but others around us. Very well written, and a message that's much needed!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can lead us to many places. Some places will scar us forever. I believe we must taste the good with the bad. Few can live a life safe from hate and violence. We need to be somewhere where we are a plus for life and hope. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Wondering Mind]

An inspiring write, nicely done.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

Yes, that the belief one should have.......and that power of negation towards negativity....................I loved your thoughts......and thw way you put them up....nice write, brilliant :-)

[MOON]

Nice flow and yes find your own North star.

[$êlvån]

Awesome one..straight from heart with bit aggression too.loved it..its motivating and makes one feel gud who is sad.full on full jhakas!!

[$êlvån]

Awesome one..straight from heart with bit aggression too.loved it..its motivating and makes one feel gud who is sad.full on full jhakas!!