Something, someday

Something, someday.

Something tells me, I can.

Something tells me I will.

Something tells me I'll make it there,

Something tells me I'll kill,

All my fears, which hold me back,

Despite the weaknesses, 

the perfection which I lack.

Shut all those, who think, 

I'm not good enough.

All those who say,

I wont make it through the rough.

Someday, I would have moved the mountain,

Someday, I would have crossed the fence,

Someday, it will all prove to be worth,

Someday, it will all make sense.

I know I have it somewhere,

What makes me different from others,

By own unique bit,

Someday, I know,

I would have found it.

Author's Note

Random!

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Lovely piece with a good flow, the concept is realy inspirational, especially after the first stabza. The middle stanza seemed to reach out for me, told me that everything I cace right now will be worth it later. Anyways, this poem could be thought of as a voice inside of you telling you to hold on. Amazing, just simply amazing.

[Manpreet]

Lovely work!

[r. f. jordan]

We're all privileged to read such seamless rhyme flow, cadence, and stanza structure. the idea of the sought after "it" is a theme i am reading over numerous of your pieces. There is profound hope in the vision of your speaker, which is deeply moving to witness. Thank you.

[Perdition]

It rolls and rolls and rolls like summoned molasses and youthful wisdoms. A very worthy read!

[patricia]

an inspiring strong write, full of possibilities. well penned. enjoyed.

[nightsun]

something = this is you :)

[Amata Luna]

This is a very good poem. I can remember it like I remember a song.

Despite the weaknesses,
the perfection which I lack.
Shut all those, who think,
I'm not good enough.

It's simply harmonious. The words seems to flow as easy on my lips. You've done a great job. My applause. :)

[Prashanth Ashok]

Symbolizes hope & trust in a big way :) Nice

[Kuhr Gred]

:) very creative! 100 for this poem

[khalid]

i love the vase you have drown here but i adore the flowers you have put in it. great work, nice images, good word picking, it is really great totally. thank you for sharing